Should the authorities from big cities around the world discourage citizens from using private cars and rather encourage them to use other means of transport such as bicycles, skates, the subway, etc.?
To begin with, migration local or global has made the city areas more crowded and is the high time to think of the means transportations to use, also because vehicles are the significant cause of pollution in metropolitan. However, known as less pollutant, healthy option and the saver of fuel, alternate transportations has myriad benefits to provide and necessity of the time. For instance, many European nations opt for the bicycles and an electric vehicle which has significantly reduces pollution in those counties making people healthier.
Second of all, one cannot forget the propitious alternate transport medium cause in the health of the citizen. For example, according to bbc uk the number of people suffering from respiratory diseases in last decade, after they have opted for electric transportation. This also has correlation to the decrease in the obesity of the people who now prefer walking or bicycle rather than private vehicles.
To recapitulate, it is the need of the era to discard vehicles with fossil fuel which is in the verge of extinction and opt for the healthy alternate of the transportation. Vehicles are known as the utmost means of pollution in colossal metropolitan, and encouraging to the alternate transportation is the best way to make people healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23557692308 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08975314859 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591346153846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.114105914 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.125 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107131977405 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454510341171 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352171943547 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702653931157 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153405308904 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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