In some countries, many people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is well known fact that people are more concerned about their privacy these days. It is argued by some that living without relationship is more advantageous. This paragraph will enlighten both side of coin and explains the need of family in the journey of individual.
On one hand, it is true that people staying alone can plan the things based on their interest. There is research which illustrate's that mental ability can be risen in case one has ability to stay in silence, away from the problems of daily routine. This can be demonstrated by the fact that ancient Indian people, they prefer to stay away from daily life and chooses to live in mountains for meditation. Almost, all the religions practices the life without relation as it is believed by them that bonding can be raised as obstacle during the journey to meet soul with God.
On other hand, there are counter-arguments which explains the need of relation during the different stages of life. The future of any country is directly proportional to the percentage of youth that resides in country. If people of any nation develops the habit of staying single, there will be surely drop in the child birth ratio and which will have direct impact on its economy. For example, ninety percent of youth living in Japan reluctant to move into relations and hence, staying without any family.It is also believed that benefits of single life can be attained with in family with the sense of co-ordination and understanding. Therefore , it can clearly infer that the choice of staying single can have direct impact on the status of any nation and hence, it can lead the development in reverse direction.
To conclude, despite the fact single life take us away from the complexity that persists in relations, it can reverse the trajectory of growth of the society if many of its residents shares the thinking of living life without anyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, well, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86153846154 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60615634342 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510769230769 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3080808067 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.538461538 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102305105429 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399378599006 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352620581913 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691866167032 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194307878466 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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