Some people spend too much time on work than their personal/private life and experience time shortage. What problems does it cause.
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend by the prodigies disccusing the influence of excessive time spent by the people at work places. Some people think that spending too much time at office area results in lack of time and disruption of personal life, while others maintain that owing to increasing demand of employers its better to spend maximum time at work place. This essay will discuss that how spending excessive time at office results in shortage of time and hampers the personal lives.
At the outset, there are myriad of agruments associated with the odds of spending too much time at office. The most conspicuous is that employers over burden their employees with excessives tasks. As a result, employees with the fear of getting fired work day in and day out to meet the demands of their bosses. As a matter of fact, it is evident that high demands by the employers overdose employees and result in lack and shortage of time.
On the other hand, people involved in high demanding sectors need to priortize their official commitments. Firstly, employees need to concentrate on their respective tasks and should not waste time during office timings. This would not only increase their productivity and efficiency but also allow to create more free time slot. For instance, people employed in job sectors like police, military and air traffic controlling need to prioritze their requriements to lead a healthy life. Hence, by adhereing to good management rules more time slots for personal life can be created.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that the excessive tasks loaded by employees can be managed by prioritization and following good management principles which would ential in more leisure time in personal life of an individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: creating
...ductivity and efficiency but also allow to create more free time slot. For instance, peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, while, for instance, in short, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11262798635 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68847109963 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552901023891 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8588463291 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333926151245 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12096151419 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779646954143 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193727295954 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916285443561 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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