You bought a TV a week ago but when you got home you discovered it did not work properly... You called the customer service to report the problem you have not yet received any help.
Write a letter to the company and in your letter:
1. Introduce yourself
2. Explain the problem
3. And state what action you would like from the company
Write not less than 150 words
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that the Sunny TV flat screen, fifty two inches I bought last week Tuesday from your store in Down Town Road is not functioning properly. I called the customer service immediately the problem started but I am still to see any action.
Let me explain the problem in details. The TV was in good condition when I bought it but when I got home everything change so fast. Firstly, it was the image quality which became very blurry then later the power button switched off and after two minutes on automatically. I immediately informed the customer service about the TV issues and they promised to send a technician right away but four days have passed and no one has came to fix it.
Could you please send a repairer to come over and repair it and if it is not possible then you replace the TV with a brand new since it has two years warranty.
Thanks for your understanding and cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
Martin Oben.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: fifty-two
...you know that the Sunny TV flat screen, fifty two inches I bought last week Tuesday from ...
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Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...ut four days have passed and no one has came to fix it. Could you please send a r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, still, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58757062147 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5307455397 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683615819209 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3560112144 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2222222222 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270648967932 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840791465666 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061955773911 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135323625596 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072833231528 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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