You can't attend a meeting with your friend.In your letter:cancel the meeting and apologiesexplain why you cancelsuggest where and when you could see each other
Dear Tom,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I have been instructed by my manager to visit London on 13th of this month. Though, I applied the leave from 1st August to 15th August this month, meeting has been fixed by client and my manager had no option but to request me to attend the same. As a result, I would not be able to present at our planned meeting. I know that you hate surprises but it was shock for me as well as at eleventh hour, I was asked to cancel my leave. I seek apology for the inconvenience caused by me.
In last letter you mentioned that you and your family are planning to visit Spain. Have you finalized your plan? I have also been informed that corporate training is being organized in September and my boss has nominated my name to attend the week long course. Moreover, attendees are being given the option to include their family on trip. I certainly see this as an opportunity to have get together of our family.
I am looking forward to hearing from you about your plan of Spain.
Best Regards,
Zomo
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Tom, I am writing this letter to inform you t...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...inly see this as an opportunity to have get together of our family. I am looking f...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35714285714 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32426939881 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5035840913 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1666666667 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209781068884 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080864441447 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955234634111 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154663967333 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355890442804 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.