It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Not everybody is a born star in talents like sports or music. Some people believe, that children can excel in such talents by being coached by an instructor. Although, having a good teacher can shape the skills but being god gifted adds a cherry on the cake.
To embark upon, many talented artists have been successful but not all leave a mark by the work they do in their respective fields. To be consistent and stay in the hearts of the masses, one must be extraordinarily talented. It is this talent that takes someone to the zenith, while, others observe from the nadir. For instance, a very famous cricketer known for his immaculate and aggressive batting skills, Mr. Sachin Tendulkar, had the knack of becoming a batsman since his childhood. Luckily, he was blessed with a wonderful coach and mentor but it was his natural ability that won him several accolades. As a result, he became the best batsmen that world has ever seen. Many famous cricketers and intellectuals attribute his success to the natural talent he possesses to play cricket.
However, not everyone is born talented. There are many people in this world who have attained immense success because of extreme hard work and passion put in by their mentors. For example, Dr. A.R. Rahman who initially started off his career by working as an Accountant in a Multinational never imagined to reach great heights in the music industry. His father who was also his coach gave him music lessons rigorously for donkey number of years. Despite having a busy schedule, Rahman with the help of his tutor/father worked day in and day out to learn the intricacies of music thereby becoming the best musicians India has ever produced.
To conclude, on the face of it, it seems that having a stupendous master can help anyone reach to the top of their field but being gifted a talent by birth adds another dimension all together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80981595092 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57596396513 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598159509202 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.199384675 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16709189772 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555972067029 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428198912052 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101301881581 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548437687841 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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