You have recently moved to a new flat. Unfortunately, you lost some money the other day and can not afford to pay next month's rent which is due. Write a letter to the landlord explaining the situation and that you will pay as soon as your parents send the money. Also, mention that there are some problems with the flat.
Dear Mr. Smith
I am your tenant and moved recently into your flat which is located in the city centre near the oxford university. I am sorry to say that I am not able to pay this month's rent before 10th. I am writing this letter to tell you about my condition and also some issues with the apartment.
Yesterday, I went to market to buy necessary items and to withdraw money from ATM to pay rent but when I returned to my room, my wallet was missing. I tried to find it but all in vain. Cash was in the purse that I lost. That is why, I am not able to make payment on time. Luckily, my debit card was not in the wallet. Now, I have asked my parents to send me some money. As soon as I received the amount, I will give you the rent.
Besides that there are several issues with the room. Firstly, the tap of the bathroom is leaking. It leads to wastage of water. Secondly, wardrobe is not closing properly and its lock is broken. As I have expensive items like laptop which is not safe to place outside without locking them in cupboard.
Hope that you could understand my situation, allowing me to pay house rent few days later and resolve the issues which I am facing in the apartment.
I am looking forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely
Flora Thompson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...le to pay this months rent before 10th. I am writing this letter to tell you abou...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...losing properly and its lock is broken. As I have expensive items like laptop whic...
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Line 11, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... the apartment. I am looking forward to hear from you. Yours sincerely Flora Tho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28099173554 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22561231597 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8709482427 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.5555555556 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4444444444 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268305302853 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667503578978 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688298208944 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134018840957 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626593186911 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.