Some people think that in the modern society individuals are becoming more dependant on each other . While, other say that individuals are becoming more independent of each other . Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this present era , some of families have both parents have busy schedule due to their work and they think that retire family member have to take care of their children to childcare center to provide such facilities . Whereas, this easy will discuss both views in following pharagraph.
To embark with, there are Manifold points to shore up my views. First and foremost, the existence of electric household devices because technology is increaseing day by day and many gadgets lunch in everyday namely computer ,washing machine and microwave so on. They do not need to take help from other person in household work . All work they can do with the help of technology . However, in earlier days due to lack of technology people had to take help from other person . Secondly, in this modern era ,children have optimum opportunity to make their career because learner choose only that field in which they are best so if they choosing field according to interest so they do not need other person because they have already related to their field . They give best their towards their work
Nevertheless, undoubtedly , there are many work in which really hard for single person so that they need to take help to compulsory their work . For example, in restaurant ,house maid and office in this field workers are needed this is because single person can not handle their whole situation they have to work with their employ to fulfil their desire . Furthermore, inflation is also chief reason behind this dependence because of some masses have do not money to fulfill basic needs they have to dependant on other person so that easily do their work without face any financially problems.
To sum up , in this era ,people are becoming more independent . Thus, dependence is better than independence because where people depend on other they get great idea towards their problems and will not face any problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.934169279 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44801975781 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520376175549 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.3594545424 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121110586113 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614957713064 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614400384623 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102609186527 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734506984174 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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