Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
Education is a process of facilitating learning and the acquisition of knowledge, skills, manners, responsibilities of good citizens, and social pupils. It is usually obtained through formal and informal settings. However, It is transferred from one person to another via storytelling, discussion, teaching, training and so on. In this regards, some people emphasize that the student should learn at school in the presence of a teacher, while others believe that studying alone at home or workplace instructs students very well. In this essay, I will on both sides of the opinion of people.
Considering the learning under the supervision of an instructor is beneficial for pupils because the teacher is a well-educated, well-trained and above all, he preserves more knowledge. Having more knowledge, he can teach and guide the students more effectively as well as enhances their social, moral, physical behaviour and cognitive skills. Moreover, he imparts certain adroit by which they can contribute to the soci-economic development of the society. As consequence, the method of teaching has the prominent impacts on students. For example, in my university life, I learnt many things related to my interesting subject from my teachers and those are still helping me in my professional life.
Globalization has changed the means of learning substantially via development in technology, thereby the e-schooling and distance learning are common among people. For instance, you can learn from any instructor or institute regarding your field of interest easily via the distance learning programs. However, e-schooling and distance learning are conducted by a single person sitting at home. The learning oneself is achieved by experiences and social interaction with communities. As a consequence, we absorb our neighbour's language only by interacting with them. Moreover, we act according to set rules of society and what we have learnt from our parents and relatives. In this regards, my mother and father's generic support during early age of my schooling helped me to value our culture, tradition and customs throughout my life.
To sum up, in my opinion, learning under the wise supervision of a mentor or teacher is as important as nurturing yourself from own experiences. In addition, flourishing yourself under the aegis of parents and relatives have significant impacts on one's social values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47311827957 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13557955958 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5449717825 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.157894737 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5789473684 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156527173193 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439605582603 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365062703055 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892612333424 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138376097763 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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