Some people think law changes human behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?
The crime rate in current society has been upsurged drastically which is unbalancing society culture. This significant imbalance in human society can be controlled by powerful law which is a natural way to commence the change in human behaviour and pay a vital role for mankind society. This essay will elaborate the positive and negative impact of law on human behaviour with a supported example.
First and foremost, to curb the crime in society a significant law and heavy fine has to be imposed by political or law-governed authorised on criminal which would result in a fear in criminal. This fear will combat his mind for any next attempt. For example, a heavy fine has to be charged on vehicle owner after breaking traffic rules. This will be pathbreaking for a traffic violation and will set a clear example for other riders. This change in law with a heavy fine or short term prison would improve the human behaviour.
On the flip side, sometimes imposing strict law makes criminal animal kind of behaviour due to the power of resistance. For example, life term ban makes murderer animal kind of the mindset which is detrimental to the society.
Overall, the positive impact of law on human behaviour outweighs the negative impact.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, as to, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95238095238 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66162789258 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 139.433497537 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519047619048 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8117470932 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5454545455 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173603944283 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769049129549 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786873855606 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12149967658 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488327385518 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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