people emphasizing government to build an advanced transport system rather new roads for vehicles that are overcrowding the cities. Do you agree or disagree?
The transport system is a basic need of any country as majority of people commute by public transport. There are some people who give more preference to build high quality road since roads are getting overcrowded due to more vehicles. In this essay, I shall be discussing about the argument and will be providing my point of view.
These days people are buying new and stylish cars due to which roads are getting overcrowded. Another benefit of having own vehicle is that people need not to wait for public transport to commute between places and they prefer to have their own vehicle. Hence, people demand government to have high quality of roads, so that travel time can be reduced.
On the other hand, majority of citizens prefer to have advance transport system, so that time can be minimized while travelling. Moreover, the public transport is affordable to use for all citizens of the country. Government should spend more amount of budget in improving public transport so that travel time can be reduced. This will increase the number of people who will be using transport system and reducing traffic on roads.
In conclusion, I feel that transport system should be improved with advanced technologies as it is being used by most of the people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wait'?
Suggestion: wait
...ing own vehicle is that people need not to wait for public transport to commute between...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, moreover, so, while, i feel, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92018779343 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52411063052 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558685446009 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.3258854079 50.4703680194 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.2727272727 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227931017664 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923134182613 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395734874595 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142939598711 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029207730223 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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