Some people prefer to spend their lives by doing same thing and avoding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some individuals may see changes as an opportunity in their life whereas others always prefer to remain as a stable position during their all life. This essay agree that differences and changes often create and bring much more benefit in compared to stability and will discuss both point of view in forthcoming paragraphs.
First of all, focus on doing same affairs can be the routine purpose of the life for some people. Those who supporter of avoiding changes think that changes might damaging their life in terms of social environment and mentally side. It is often meat point that each human has to stay where we are happy and do suitable job in which we are very well. For example; the latest researches, done by Canadian Governments , shown that 40 per cent of migrant family did not adopt customs and laws due to religion and other reasons in Canada between 1900’s and 200’s years which leaded to conflict among general public. This result might reach that this idea could be true.
However, others are of opinion that small changes would much more benefit in some ways than doing same things. According to supporters of this idea that new opportunities always may be obtained by changing something in our life and this movements would affect positively our relationship with self-confidence, productivity and other parts of our life. A businessman , for instance, who have experienced failures in his or her business, will resort to new strategies in order to make the business more firms and highly profitable.
In conclusion, both views have their own advantages and disadvantages. I am of the opinion that it totally depends on personal choices and preferences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'agrees'.
Suggestion: agrees
...ition during their all life. This essay agree that differences and changes often crea...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a supporter'.
Suggestion: who is a supporter
...pose of the life for some people. Those who supporter of avoiding changes think that changes ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...researches, done by Canadian Governments , shown that 40 per cent of migrant famil...
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Line 3, column 606, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...;s years which leaded to conflict among general public. This result might reach that this idea...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...d by changing something in our life and this movements would affect positively our ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...something in our life and this movements would affect positively our relationship...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d other parts of our life. A businessman , for instance, who have experienced fail...
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Suggestion:
... disadvantages. I am of the opinion that it totally depends on personal choices a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, well, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06810035842 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7466394129 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637992831541 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8864009177 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178792051827 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067601335875 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057548498832 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11386622283 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334856805643 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.