You have a pen-friend living in another country and he/she is curious to learn about the major news items in your country.Write a letter to your pen-friend. In your letter:•Greet your friend and say why you are writing.•Briefly describe a news story i
Hello Dave,
How are you doing? I hope this letter finds in good health and mental peace. I received your last letter and i'm glad you're interested in recent news trends in India. I can you give you a brief insight about the few of the major issues which are affecting large population.
First of all, The parliament elections are around the corner, so most of the parties are actively endorsing their agenda over almost all forms of media. You can follow daily debates by various candidates, on some of the famous news channel, such as AajTak TV. By looking at popularity, in my opinion, Janta Dal party is leading the battle so far. Secondly, there is huge debate ongoing regarding women safety, especially in metro cities, due to increasing number of rape incidents these days. People are furious with the governments because of their inability to established a proper law and order.
These are the major affairs which are affecting a large crowd. I can refer you to a media expert if you need to carry out further investigation.
I hope this information will be of some use to you and I look forward to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Sandip
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...I received your last letter and im glad youre interested in recent news trends in Ind...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...erested in recent news trends in India. I can you give you a brief insight about ...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...daily debates by various candidates, on some of the famous news channel, such as AajTak TV....
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s channel, such as AajTak TV. By looking at popularity, in my opinion, Janta Dal ...
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Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fety, especially in metro cities, due to increasing number of rape incidents thes...
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Line 9, column 71, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...e of some use to you and I look forward to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Sandip
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73399014778 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48893788853 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684729064039 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9435840487 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9230769231 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182534648461 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562327770025 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694546416488 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112036462303 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924874089692 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.