You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• ask your friend to send you one of the photographs
• explain why you need that particular photograph
• and tell your friend what happened to your copy of it.
Dear Hung,
It’s Truong, your pal. I’m sure you still remember our trip to Ba Na Hills last December, in which we took a ton of photographs together. Therefore, I’m writing this letter to ask for one particular photo that you shot.
Let’s cut to the chase. The picture I need is the one that captured a dancing-man shape of the cloud and myself underneath. I’d like to set this picture my Facebook cover which, I think, would be really awesome. With my new cover, I think I could attract my acquaintances’ attention and gain a huge amount of thumbs-up and likes. However, the photo is going to need some adjustments with Photoshop before being posted on my page with a few changes in color, saturation and sharpness. Since my Photoshop skills is limited, I would be very appreciated if you could help with the adjustments since your skills is way more advanced.
Anyway, I’m really looking forward to receiving this photograph from you.
Your best friend,
Truong Nguyen
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-06-07 | drtruong92 | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, however, if, look, really, so, still, therefore, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04142011834 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8430336327 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680473372781 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.123478645 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4545454545 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255213280314 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951707247317 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795844825249 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154967720753 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658124035727 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.