Some organisations integrate employees in decision making process of their goods and services. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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Some organisations integrate employees in decision making process of their goods and services. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Submitted by 1987khil on Thu, 06/14/2018 - 21:19

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in integrating employees in decision making process of their goods and services. There are several advantages than disadvantages by listening workers.I will discuss both side in this essay with my own opinion in this essay.

There are number of advantages by bringing the staff in decision making. The most important fact is that, the employees are part of organisation and they know the details of their product, cost and system. Furthermore, they will be motivated and even work hard for the company's betterment. For example: most staff think they are just a worker and do not bother for the progress of their workplace. Hence, the involvement in meeting will be the reward for the staff.

On the other hand, some of the staff works as part-time in one company and they can leak the information to another company. It will be the biggest threat for company. So, the company need to be very careful while choosing the staff in the process of decision making for their goods and services.Therefore, there are some drawbacks while integrating employees in company meeting.

In view of the arguments outlined above, I believe that the benefits from the decision making with collaboration of employees is too great than the drawbacks.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, so, therefore, while, for example, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02752293578 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83800781528 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545871559633 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8232124393 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6363636364 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363296460221 0.242375264174 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115608051827 0.0925447433944 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118717007647 0.071462118173 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211872627684 0.151781067708 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127781338964 0.0609392437508 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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