Some people say that computer games are bad for children by all means;others believe that these games are contributing to children’ development.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There has been a significant advancement in the field of science and technology. Computer is not exceptional.Presently,some masses reckon that computer games are harmful for offspring’s.On contrary,others believe that video games are lucrative for the overall development of adolescents.Here,I would like to account for both sides with my own perception.
There are multifarious negative aspects of playing computer games.First and foremost,in this contemporary world,computer games may adversely effects on health of children.For example,nowadays,infants spend prolonged hours in front of computer,laptop and mobile phones and further it,leads to sedentary lifestyle. As a result,the children become victim of health hazards such as week optics,headache, migraine,respiratory illness and many more. Consequently,computer games are bad for juveniles.
There are numerous positive aspects of playing video games.To commence with,computer games are lucrative for infants to broaden knowledge horizon.To examplify,in video games pupils have to explore enormous ideas while crossing distinct stages of games in order to win. As a result,the children tend to develop high level thinking and it makes them more skillful and creative.Furthermore, a child becomes good decision maker under the influence of strategy games.In this way,computer games contribute remarkably in the development of children.Consequently,computer games are lucrative for infants.
In my notion,both aspects have their own significance.Undeniably,computer games has several drawbacks.However,computer games are lucrative for the betterment of children.Therefore, the children should be played these games under the parental restrictions so that the darker side of this phenomenon can be curbed.
To recapitulate,games become indispensable part of every individual.Undeniably,computer games has several disadvantages.However,it is beneficial for the development of adolescents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.60465116279 5.12529762239 129% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.19243300344 2.80592935109 185% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.126738719 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.333333333 106.682146367 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4444444444 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346722357854 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15244120658 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908495388233 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201000797308 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583822537961 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 0.76 50.2224549098 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.59 12.4159519038 174% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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