You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Maria,
Hope you and your family are in good health and spirits. I just thought of letting you know that I shifted to a new apartment last week and I'm so elated about it. You know very well that my previous hostel was a shared one and that I had to tolerate my annoying room mates who would talk over the phone all through the night. Moreover, it was very far from my work place and commuting to office was painful.
My new residence is in J.P.Nagar area which is just a 10-minute walk to my office. It's a very spacious double bedroom flat with a modular kitchen. It's on the 2nd floor and the view from the balcony is refreshing as there are plenty of trees on my street. However, the rent is slightly on the higher side since I'am the only inmate and I can compromise for the locality and privacy.
It would be great if you could come over here sometime and stay with me for a day or two. I guess weekends would be ideal for both of us. It's been a long time since we met and this could be an opportunity to catch up and spend some quality time with each other. Let me know your convenience. I'm eagerly waiting for your reply.
With warm regards
Priya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Maria, Hope you and your family are in good hea...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...hifted to a new apartment last week and Im so elated about it. You know very well ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nagar
... painful. My new residence is in J.P.Nagar area which is just a 10-minute walk to ...
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... is just a 10-minute walk to my office. Its a very spacious double bedroom flat wit...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ch other. Let me know your convenience. Im eagerly waiting for your reply. With...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our reply. With warm regards Priya
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, i guess, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24107142857 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16241078617 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638392857143 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.927457389 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8571428571 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0933771192881 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340518728061 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381970210533 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602490380052 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349514087362 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.