Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind , such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irreuocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic assets that for relaxation: 'should it is essential to utilize free time by doing voluminous activities like, reading as well as doing cross puzzles or taking rest is the best method to relax the mind'? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic with illustration and examples and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that; to relax the mind best activity is to read some books or doing other activities like solve cross puzzles during leisure time. They strengthen their view point by claiming that there is no doubt, that 'Health is wealth.' Therefore, according to world health organization healthy person is that who is physically, socially as well as mentally fit, but it is only possible if, a person relax his mind by doing some creative activities during his free time. A good illustration of this is inspirational books and other creative activities helps to improve intellectual ability of an individual.
Apart from that, activity like listening music is considered as a best medicine to cure the 'hypertension' by overcome the stress of any person. Hence, listening music, reading books are some best epitome to relax mind during leisure time.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who argue that, rest is important to relax the mind during leisure time. To make their argument convincing they claim that nodoubt, in the present scenerio, with the advancement of technology everyone is busy in his hectic time schedule. As a result, they have no time to take rest. Thus, they suffer from serious illness. Depression, hypertension would be the perfect epitome. Due to this reason, it is important to relax mind during free time by taking rest.
To crown it all, I pen down saying that weighing both the options; there is no single conclusion still, I make this ground that an effective clap require both use of hands. Therefore, nodoubt, creative activities such as: reading books and playing games is the best method to overcome the burden but it is also essential to take rest during leisure time to improve the efficiency of mind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'mind the best'.
Suggestion: mind the best
...f people who believe that; to relax the mind best activity is to read some books or doing...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...y like listening music is considered as a best medicine to cure the hypertension ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95343137255 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6827645865 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497549019608 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2322065571 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.368421053 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4736842105 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94736842105 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393675094403 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113056970626 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125890673434 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214588215829 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060548782907 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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