Some people get famous at a young age. Is its a good or a bad thing?
With prosperity and fame bestows responsibility. These days we see many people gain fame at a young age. These might be due to a novice act of their own or they are heirs to famous personas. As per my opinion being known to the world at a young age has its own pros and cons.
People are aware of your existence and give you a stature of being a celebrity which some get after years of struggle and strive being invested for it. Some even start earning good sum of money. However, we cannot overlook the dark side of such acceptance. Life starts being captured under a scanner. Media plays a vital role in bringing to people's awareness all the acts of such people. To exemplify, Angelina Jolie and Brad Pitt or Shakira's kids are too small to even know what exist around them but their life is public display. These norms sets benchmarks and unrealistic expectations from the fan followers of these kids famous parents. At times failure to cope with such pressure leads teenagers towards depression and suicidal acts. They define their mainstream at career basis people's expectations. They forego their childhood and follow the protocol of the industry to which they belong.
It has been observed there are some who have a negative impact on their studies. Studies have proved forcing a child's growth beyond the necessitated phase can hamper physical and mental development in the long run. Being known around has a nation wide influence. Unsustainable peer pressure and failure to withstand the competition can be fatal which can result to unethical practices.
To conclude fame can act as a positive catalyst if leveraged upon appropriately. It should be considered in the right spirit. People should refrain from settimg pre defined objectives that can cause in an adverse outburst in the life of such kids. There should be a balanced growth plan strategised that will help them choose their areas of interest helping them escape the shadows of their legacy. Anyone can be a victim of failure and famous personalities are at no mercy. As per my analysis the disadvantages outweigh of being famous at a young age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to be'.
Suggestion: to be
... get after years of struggle and strive being invested for it. Some even start earnin...
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Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...Media plays a vital role in bringing to peoples awareness all the acts of such people. ...
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Line 2, column 544, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'set'.
Suggestion: set
...eir life is public display. These norms sets benchmarks and unrealistic expectations...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
... the long run. Being known around has a nation wide influence. Unsustainable peer pressure ...
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Line 4, column 476, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d famous personalities are at no mercy. As per my analysis the disadvantages outw...
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Line 4, column 498, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are at no mercy. As per my analysis the disadvantages outweigh of being famous a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85082872928 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62797069401 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599447513812 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9699366679 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1666666667 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 7.06120827912 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226630684641 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599453437124 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759115263207 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134605876416 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764928178512 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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