The development of an outlying island
These two pictures show the development of an outlying island from the past condition to the recent time.
In the past time the outlying island was a quite one without island dwellers. Some coconut trees only consisted in this location. The island was surrounded by sea and untouched beach area in the corner of the island.
Several time elapsed, the island changed more complete as an entertainment island. A lot of orderly accommodation has been built and spread in the island which connected by footpath each other. It also can be seen that a pier with couple forking for yachts. Vehicle track from the pier connect directly to reception office where a restaurant is built on behind. Moreover, we can see the untouched beach becomes swimming area at that time.
Overall, these illustrations show a huge development of an outlying island day by day, from a quite place change be a orderly crowded island.
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