what are disadvantages and advantages of having older people living in the family home

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what are disadvantages and advantages of having older people living in the family home

In our society nowadays, a state of art family, which has three or four members, is becoming more and more prevalent. Nevertheless, there are some humongous family with a variety of generations, especially those of older people. This essay will examine the beneficial and detrimental effects of living with the old in family.
From one point of view, I’m of opinion that the older human is, the more knowledge he has. It is identified that the elders had overcame some kinds of challenges when they met incidents. Therefore, the invariably convey sorts of precious experience to their families and cultivate ethical education for their children. Additionally, should the family have the older people living, it will have cozy ambience frequently. To identify, the elders are the digital stories of historical circumstances; as a result, they know how to make family members be pleasure by their stories.
As far as an opposite view is concerned, not only are the elders tremendously conservative, but the gap between the old generation and that of the youth also emerges. It is exemplified that the youngsters are curious about possessing individual space for their leisure pursuits, while their grandparents compel them to gather in general areas. Accidentally, the large discrepancy between generations’ opinion make vast distance significantly in each family. For instance, conservations of the elders do not fascinate their children, regardless of effective experience. It causes the silence of the young member during entire communication.
In conclusion, although living with the older people in family has many advantages, it still has some detrimental effects on atmosphere of family.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'overcome'.
Suggestion: overcome
...s. It is identified that the elders had overcame some kinds of challenges when they met ...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4696969697 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1303925007 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628787878788 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6183203096 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.142857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170466081873 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577344497752 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872079278272 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117898899086 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816633403884 0.056905535591 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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