The tables show the population density in 6 countries and the increasing rate of urban population in 2008.
The given tabular representation depicts the population density in 6nations and the increasing rate of urban population during the year of2008. The data is calibrated in percentum . It is clearly and coherently representation .
It can be seen that population density of six countries during the year of 2008. China had about 34,876 population per kilometer square and it had been about the largest population density as compare to other nations . In addition to this ,India was the second largest population density , it had about 23,980 population per kilometer square.
As far as trend was concerned , canada had 98% of population in cities . However , Uruguay had least population in cities. Which was only 25 percent. However , Egypt had only 37 percent of population density .
Overall , it was evident that the highest population density in china ,and the lowest population density was in Canada out of six countries .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34246575342 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91350975437 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527397260274 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6208305687 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9090909091 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2727272727 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 1.69756097561 1885% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433173713743 0.215688989381 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164968664397 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128604643222 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271262287654 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573230446341 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.8 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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