last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
1) thank them for the photos and for the holiday.
2) explain why you didn't write earlier.
3) invite them to come and stay with you.
Dear Sarah and John,
I anticipate you both are doing very well. First of all, I’d like to thank you for such an unforgettable and fantastic trip; it was one of my best vacations in Singapore. I can’t thank you enough for your hospitality and your time to stay with me. I’ve just received your email with all photos and believe me such an amazing photographer john is, I mean all photos are stunning. Why doesn’t he start professional photography?
Furthermore, sorry I was unable to write you back earlier, something worse happened when I left for my home. My luggage was erroneously sent to somewhere else instead of Sydney after which I waited 24 hours, to get it back. The ordeal does not finished yet; when I reached home, I was told that my landlord forgot to pay electricity bills and I had to live there without this basic requirement for one day.
Anyway, why don’t you come and visit Australia? I’ll be free next month and I can plan your itinerary as well. There are absolutely some exquisite places to visit and I’d love to take both of you. Do let me know if you want to come.
Hope to see you momentarily, and give my sincere regards to uncle and aunt.
Lots of love,
EK
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'finish'
Suggestion: finish
...rs, to get it back. The ordeal does not finished yet; when I reached home, I was told th...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, furthermore, if, so, well, as to, i mean, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69266055046 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68475622736 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678899082569 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5897012558 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0714285714 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333572614578 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108448442193 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799019925947 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142292104734 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110608865738 0.0580467560999 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.