Using a computer ever day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is argued that children spending a lot of their time each day on computers will have more detrimental effects than having constructive impacts. I strongly agree with this statement, the following paragraphs will discuss the ramifications of using too much computer, which will be followed by a reasoned conclusion.
Children while using computers utilize most of their time by playing video games, and it is not just video games but they usually like to play violent video games. Moreover, in this kind of games, the player which is a child performs all killings just to complete a particular mission. Such games have very severe consequences on the mind of children. They lose emotions and feelings of people and become very rigid. Furthermore, the aftermaths of these games are not just limited to it, but it also is the principal cause of decline in the students’ performance in exam. For instance, a research was concluded by the students of Stanford University in 2012, the research was also published in New York times later, it says that more than 70% of children who do not perform well, spend more than 3 hours daily playing video games.
Excessive use of computers also affects the health of children, sitting in front of computer all day long means less physical activity which will cause common health diseases; for example, obesity, eyesight weakness, and headache. Physical activity like playing cricket and football are also imperative for healthy life, but children do not understand the importance of it and they prefer to play games and use internet all day is enough for their learning and enjoyment. For example, an article was published in the Washington Posts about health in which it was stated that 80% of people who wear eyesight glasses are those who spend four to five hours daily in front of their computers.
In conclusion, it can be inferred that computers no doubt is one of the blessings of science but its excessive use has more harmful effects on the life of our children.
- Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film starts, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? which other types of jobs should be highly paid? 78
- Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film starts, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? which other types of jobs should be highly paid? 78
- Using a computer ever day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 73
- last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter1) thank them for the photos and for the holiday.2) explain why you didn't write e 89
- You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter1) explain why you have moved2) describe your new house3) Invite your friend to come and visit 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95882352941 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65556802257 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532352941176 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3038602044 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184967412408 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069347225325 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586400165407 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124988993474 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028144506941 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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