You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter
1) explain why you have moved
2) describe your new house
3) Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Francis,
I anticipate you’re doing very well. I’m writing this because I’ve finally found a house which I was looking for. Earlier, I told you about my living condition you know it was difficult for me to live in a small house. My both children are growing up, and living in a two bedrooms apartment was not easily. So I decided to search for a new house.
My new house is quite bigger in size and it has a swimming pool as well; my children love swimming pool. It has four bedrooms and a luxurious kitchen. Moreover, it’s got three washrooms and an awesome TV lounge. How could I forget about a garden and separate car parking area; the garden is full of disparate kind of plants. In my old apartment, I was concerned for parking space; usually I parked my car outside of the apartment. You already know that my previous car was stolen outside of the apartment, but now I can park a car inside my home.
Anyway, why don’t you come and visit my new house? I’m sure you’re going to love it. New address and telephone number are mentioned below, give me a call anytime and do let me know when you’re coming.
Hope to see you soon, give my sincere regards to uncle and aunt.
Lots of love,
EK
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: bigger
... a new house. My new house is quite bigger in size and it has a swimming pool as well; my ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, finally, if, look, moreover, so, well, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58666666667 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51578326413 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617777777778 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6995902864 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.5 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0625 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108671559739 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428860004478 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500883024605 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786798608713 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440076388484 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.