The daigram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of the silk cloth
The given diagram demonstrates the information about the four life stage of the silkworm which are produce by the silk cloth
It is clear that, the silkworm are produced by the four main stages. It's processed of silk cloth production. It's involves six steps,from silkworm cocoon to silk material.
Moving ahead, the first stages in the life of a silkworm, the moth lays her eggs. Almost after ten days, these larva hatch from the eggs,moreover, these larva have eaten a mulberry leaf. After that, atomism four to Sis weeks, the larva become wrap with the silk thread. Then, it's takes between three to eight days. These for a full cocoon to be produced.
Overall, A cocoon first selected and then boiled in water. Having boiling , the silk thread that makes the cocoon is unwinded. Then, several strond are twisted together. After that, the fifth and sixth stages in the process, the thread can either be woven and then dyed into silk fabric .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...worm which are produce by the silk cloth It is clear that, the silkworm are produ...
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Suggestion: , from
...cloth production. Its involves six steps,from silkworm cocoon to silk material. Mov...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this larva' or 'these larvae', 'these larvas'?
Suggestion: this larva; these larvae; these larvas
...h lays her eggs. Almost after ten days, these larva hatch from the eggs,moreover, these lar...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , moreover
...en days, these larva hatch from the eggs,moreover, these larva have eaten a mulberry leaf...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this larva' or 'these larvae', 'these larvas'?
Suggestion: this larva; these larvae; these larvas
...ese larva hatch from the eggs,moreover, these larva have eaten a mulberry leaf. After that,...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...between three to eight days. These for a full cocoon to be produced. Overall, A...
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Suggestion:
...cocoon first selected and then boiled in water. Having boiling , the silk thread ...
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Suggestion: ,
...nd then boiled in water. Having boiling , the silk thread that makes the cocoon i...
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Suggestion: .
... be woven and then dyed into silk fabric .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82716049383 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27954199769 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623456790123 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2167502249 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1666666667 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.5 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226049114786 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079945416136 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085150150072 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167887474034 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909399411908 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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