The table below gives information about Favorite pastime in different cauntries in percentage?
The tabular chart reveals the information about the seven pastimes activities which are performed by 30to50 years old in eight different nations. The data is calibrated in percentum which is clearly and coherently represented.
Overall, it is evident that Japan is only nation who performed an activity, and that is reading, and as well as Japan has highest percentage in reading upto 60.
It is crystal clear from the table, Canada is participated in seven activities but it has highest percentage in telivision. In addition to this, England has intrested in four activities but it has been lowest percentage in music. However, In France reading, hobbies and music has 30,20 and 4 respectively.
As far as, trend is concerned that Australia, Korea, China and U.S.A are joined in all activities. Moreover, Australia has maximum percentum in telivision as compare to other activities, While Korea and china has been equal percentage in reading. Furthermore, in Korea nation music, beach and sleep activities has 2,2 and 4 respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'been the lowest'.
Suggestion: been the lowest
...intrested in four activities but it has been lowest percentage in music. However, In France...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
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Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26506024096 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98004686941 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5070613018 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1111111111 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 5.23603664747 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116623958852 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417846334326 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571902917694 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672231519011 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485902971495 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.