You recently read about an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. Use following points:
- What is the article about?
- What is the error?
- What you expect an editor to do?
Dear Sir,
My name is Truong Nguyen, who is one of the loyal customer of your newspaper. Recently, I have read an article about a vital car accident caused by my dearest friend, Hung Nguyen, on this Thursday evening. However, there was a false information about the accident, which wrongly put an accusation on my buddy. Therefore, I am writing this letter regarding this matter.
Allow me to briefly explain the incident. While my friend and I were heading home from a celebrating party on Thursday, a man randomly decided to cross the highway without looking for traffic. Thus, we were not able to react and hit the brakes in time to prevent this accident from happening. I could assure that my friend, who was the driver, was 100 percent sober with evidence. However, the article stated that he was drunk at that moment.
Currently, I am enormously disappointed about your newspaper. Therefore, I expect that you would have a look and fix this information as soon as possible.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Truong Nguyen
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- Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development? 73
- Scientists believe computers will become more intelligent than human beings Some people think this development will have positive impacts To what extent do you agree or disagree 92
- Once children start school the teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than parents To what extend do you agree or disagree 70
- In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- Nowadays many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that working from home has many benefits while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, however, look, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93406593407 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65702378413 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.368837108 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0769230769 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17301015205 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579865500542 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064562474675 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119368778699 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696660679881 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.