Some people think that in the 21st century people are enjoying a better quality of life compared to previous centuries.
what is your opinion?
The present generation is often considered to have a high standard of life in comparison to the past. In my opinion, due to the social and health reasons, I disagree with this view.
Firstly, at present, the social relationships are becoming more weak, leading to depression and loneliness. In other words, in the past time, people used to spend the leisure time with loved ones owing to which love and affection were more among them. However, nowadays, individuals emphasize the professional life rather than devoting time to the family and friends, which results in less understanding and more conflicts. As a result, the chance of family breakdown increases. For instance, a survey conducted by conducted by the sociology department of the University of Texas reveals that the divorce rate has burgeoned by three times within the last four decades in Europe.
Conversely, some people argue that due to having the advanced technological innovations, such as the internet, automobiles, air-conditioners and the futuristic medical care, individuals are leading luxurious and comfortable lives in this modern age. However, I personally believe that these developments are responsible for the environmental and health deterioration which are the pertinent reasons for worsening the human life in this contemporary era. To illustrate, people mostly prefer to commute by using their cars or motorbikes running on fossil fuels which cause air pollution, leading to the global warming; consequently, the natural calamities, such as earthquakes, hurricanes and floods are becoming rampant. Moreover, in the free time, instead of participating in the physical activities, they often prefer to prefer to use the internet and play video games, which are responsible for the lifestyle-related ailments.
To conclude, I believe that in the past time, the life was better since, presently, individuals have become self-centric and degradation of health as well as the environment is burgeoning.
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Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53442622951 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19949270368 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3667335577 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.666666667 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0920048740819 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308640215785 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025401845593 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555625487921 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112260311611 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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