Twenty years ago, Dr. Field, a noted anthropologist, visited the island of Tertia. Using an observation-centered approach to studying Tertian culture, he concluded from his observations that children in Tertia were reared by an entire village rather than by their own biological parents. Recently another anthropologist, Dr. Karp, visited the group of islands that includes Tertia and used the interview-centered method to study child-rearing practices. In the interviews that Dr. Karp conducted with children living in this group of islands, the children spent much more time talking about their biological parents than about other adults in the village. Dr. Karp decided that Dr. Field's conclusion about Tertian village culture must be invalid. Some anthropologists recommend that to obtain accurate information on Tertian child-rearing practices, future research on the subject should be conducted via the interview-centered method.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
From above mentioned information, we can know that the two anthropologist don’t get the same conclusion after using two different approaches.
To begin with, Dr. Field using observation-centered method to study Tertian culture said children there were reared by an entire village rather than by their own biological parents. It’s likely that parent rather busy farming and tend not to pay more attention to their children. At that time, the futility rate is higher than now, so children often gather and play with other kids when parents didn’t have time to take care of them. However, what’s the number of sample that Dr. Field have surveyed?
The experiment was conducted 20 years ago, so it’s evident that the data he obtained isn’t valid anymore, especially regarding culture, which may shifted rapidly less than a year, let alone 2 decades. What’s more, Dr. Field only observed children were reared by whom, which is not enough to confirm the conclusion. What’s the background of those children? It’s possible that their parent had to go to other cities to raise the family. Rear can be divided into accompany and financial support. It’s little biased to say children in Tertia is reared by the entire village rather than their biological parents.
On the other hand, Dr. Karp also conducted the experiment after Dr. Field visited Tertia. Nevertheless, did he went to the same area with Dr. Field? Through the memo, we can just infer that the location is this group of islands. Is these islands exactly same with Dr. Field? If not, the data he collected may not be convincing even though he did thoroughly. He chose interview-centered to study the issue, but we’re not able to know what these questions are about? In addition, we don’t know what response did those children reply.
To sum up, it still leave many questions for them to answer before we want to decide which method or argument is more reasonable.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 329 350
No. of Characters: 1548 1500
No. of Different Words: 190 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.259 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.705 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.568 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 67 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 44 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.316 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.406 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.526 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.305 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.514 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.142 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, in addition, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 28.8173652695 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 2260.96107784 74% => OK
No of words: 324.0 441.139720559 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1450617284 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79792930542 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 204.123752495 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.468620217663 129% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 705.55239521 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8145455216 57.8364921388 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7368421053 119.503703932 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0526315789 23.324526521 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 5.70786347227 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.67664670659 214% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296344692426 0.218282227539 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873639670463 0.0743258471296 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944479467376 0.0701772020484 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133029755103 0.128457276422 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916837650634 0.0628817314937 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.3799401198 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.3550499002 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 98.500998004 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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