Many people believe that a member of family is more important than a friend. Do you agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly, majority of people regards family to be highly crucial than a friend. However, other holds opposite opinion and do not deny an importance of being acquainted with a friend. I am firmly in the favour of family than a friends because of multiple reasons.
There are multifarious reasons which family provide great deal of help. Firstly, a family gives financial support a member in every phase of life. As family gives enough money not only single purpose but also many other things. For example, daily needs are fulfilled by the family like paying the school fees ectera due to this every one depends on their family members. On the other hand, parents encourage to their children for every work field although some times parents are not capable to fulling all needs but they want to try for this.
To be more precise, in the emergency or hard situation, a family is only which gives support emotionally economically. Indeed, family is a much better in any situation and handle to their members in a polite way.For instance, when a person who is died then some are fully broken and do not do any type of care by their self while, others understand and continuesly giveing to support so that a person recover immediately. In case of problems coming to their life family gives significant amount of suggestions to reducing the issues.
In crux , as without the material of does not make building similarly, life is not possible without the support of family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a friend' or simply 'friends'?
Suggestion: a friend; friends
... am firmly in the favour of family than a friends because of multiple reasons. There ar...
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Line 2, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at deal of help. Firstly, a family gives financial support a member in every phas...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: A_MUCH_NN1[1]
Message: Maybe you should omit the article "a", leaving only 'much'.
Suggestion: much
...ionally economically. Indeed, family is a much better in any situation and handle to t...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a polite way" with adverb for "polite"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...y situation and handle to their members in a polite way.For instance, when a person who is died...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...handle to their members in a polite way.For instance, when a person who is died the...
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Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...stions to reducing the issues. In crux , as without the material of does not mak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, similarly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8373015873 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54548523292 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615079365079 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7483130674 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.583333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228370660762 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867646343282 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601355388138 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123938124851 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976833592666 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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