In some country the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them.
In some parts of the world, the trend that people have to deal with the gaining of weight and the increasing of several health proplems has been a heated topic. Some explanations for this problem wil be put forward, before a few feasible solutions can be dawn.
To begin with, there are two significant reason as to why people are currently more overweight. The primary reason is that they have eaten fast food so much. It could be ascribed to the convenience that fast food brings, including helping people save time in bustling life today. If people depend on fast food, they could be likely to suffer from many serious diseases such as: obesity, diabetes and hypertension. Their health, as a result, would deteriorate. Another obivous reason is that people do not do exercise regularly. This is because they are busy with work and there are not enough appropriate space in many big cities for physical activities like go jogging or cycling. One of chooses is joining in gym centre which many people can not afford.
However, some effective measure could be used to tackle this problem. Firstly, the government should introduce some policy to curb the consumption of fastfood. It can be done by imposing heavy taxes on unhealthy food and control the quality of fast food companies. Secondly, more parks should be erected to serve citizens, which is conducive for people to do outdoor activities, thereby improve their health.
To sum up, the problem of being overweight and decreasing health level can be attributed for a few factors, such as the dependace on fast food. Strong remedy, including imposing heavy taxes on this kind of food, need to be implemented to address this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some health'.
Suggestion: some health
...gaining of weight and the increasing of several health proplems has been a heated topic. Some ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56853822735 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.49977355 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216308420621 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756272431502 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519340116686 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14411676442 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286005829256 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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