Fast food has become a part of our society. What is the impact of fast food on human life?
Nowadays, it has became a colossal trend to see that fast food has become a part of our society and life too.There are myraids of reasons on how fast food impact on human life and however it is important or not.In this essay, I shall further elaborate both sides which would lead to plausible conclusions.
At the outset, there are deluge of arguments which favoures how fast food has become a part of our society. In todays era, all people and childrens are like test of fast food because they don't know about how it affect on there body.Childrens more like fast food behalf of home made foods but mothers father have to rights to explain which one is important and healthy food on human life. furthermore, achiving further imformation we have to change our daily routin for lunch, dinner and breakfast. So we get good life and healthy too.
On the flip side, critics argue that by not following standard policy for fast food we have to need some and more water for our daily routin. Either fast food we need to drink water so it is make our body healthy and good. Furthermore, to reach at the dignified level fast food is very harm for our body having fast food is like death so we have to make one promise to our family members that we do not eat fast food.
To recapitulate, from the above mentioned arguments one can conclude that fast food is very unhealthy impact on our life so in my point of view, we all need to eat healthy food so we live healthy like one sentence "Eat healthy live healthy".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49819494585 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37821484531 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512635379061 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.2828768509 50.4703680194 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.444444444 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7777777778 20.9669160288 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.501320979976 0.242375264174 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.236629875745 0.0925447433944 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134437862904 0.071462118173 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3375358633 0.151781067708 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976322690563 0.0609392437508 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 53.1260098522 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.5310837438 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.94827586207 176% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 69.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 62.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.