Fast food has become a part of our society. What is the impact of fast food on human life?
Surely, there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveal fast food has been one of the prominent topics in contemporary discussions. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain the impact of fast food on human life. Regarding to this I would like to say to my viewpoint in upcoming paragraph.
On the one hand, fast food is like a part of our society. Furthermore, in this time period lots of people are fond of fast food. If we can see there are so many shops available in our surroundings. There are very big crowd at that shops. Moreover, many people like fast food and used to it.
On the other hand, there are so many negative impacts on our health. Moreover, in ancient time period people eat only homemade products but it is opposite in this era as lot of people eat only fast food as compared to vegan food. People are not aware of their health and invite diseases by consuming fast food. Moreover, they suffer from so many diseases such as malaria, cold, fever and many more .The fast food is only a diseases
As a case in point, I would like to say that people should take care of their health and eat healthy food which is cooked at home. Moreover, People should be made aware of their health so that they can get rid of ailments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44129554656 5.00649968141 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34279013288 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51012145749 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4005861472 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3571428571 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357985054006 0.242375264174 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147795810975 0.0925447433944 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13506057368 0.071462118173 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222682563565 0.151781067708 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115033686043 0.0609392437508 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 12.6369458128 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.1260098522 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 11.5310837438 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.32886699507 84% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 55.0591133005 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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