Fast food has become a part of our society. What is the impact of fast food on human life?
The cacophony of traffic and plethora of competitive life style had forced the human to drive a fast life. This incur the need of fast
eating resulting having single option as fast food. Accepting the demerits of it we have many advantages as well of fast food. Let's
delve into this essay further to elaborate the consequences and effects of fast food to society and human life.
As said, the invention of fast food can be derived from its name "FAST FOOD". The ascending urge in human to aquire more and reach out to
summit in lesser span of time frame is deducting the nutrition from health. As they are more and more prone to fast food. The basic
ingredient of fast food is anything that can be cooked and served quickly. We all know that to reap the nutrient value from any food we
need to give it proper time to cook, bake and stir. Unfortunately these takes lots of time which is dearth for modern human.
These attributes help to introduce processed food, those are half cooked, store with preservatives, refrigerated for months just to
advocate the need as it can be cooked and served in 2 minutes. The consequences are fatal, as it rises cholesterol level, feeble bone
structure, indigestion causing liver failure, kidney stones and organ failures. These symptoms are prominent among young people nowadays
in the age of 30 to 40 year. People are suffering from obesity, resulting demises of self esteem and confidence. All are consequences of
plethora in fast food.
Fast food can also be good for health, provided we start thinking in a positive way and avoiding processed raw materials. Advocating the
fact that fast food is not good for health we should invent alternatives for better options.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96283783784 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60300710731 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9544749387 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4117647059 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.35294117647 7.25397266985 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.12807881773 339% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.33497536946 394% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380338823708 0.242375264174 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143134860891 0.0925447433944 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105535201988 0.071462118173 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157925868157 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123825830831 0.0609392437508 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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