Which job is better self employment or company and institutional job. Give your opinions.

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Which job is better self employment or company and institutional job. Give your opinions.

Employement provide facilities to achieve the goals and satisfied our basic neccestites. The topic also related with self employment and institutional job. In this essay I shall explore both point views.

Self employment refers to earning by a single person or group of persons in the family. These types of business helps to improve profit. There is only one single owner and do not share profit with any one. Sole properiter earning more money and facilities are more as compare to partnership firm. The Indian government survey conducted that ten out of seven people only do self employement job.

On the other hand, now the term of modernisation and people had totally change their life style. Institutions improve their structure.,strategies and also pre-planned. When group of partner make any project, or manufactured any product it have full of quality
These types of institutions earn profit as well as provide mutual help to people, because policies are made in this term. The survey conducted by California University the product are very useful which are made by special company.

Overall, it is depend on people interest some people are well qualified and they may set their own business and some people have basic knowledge they only job for complete their basic needs.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17619047619 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83254891102 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2251867705 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6153846154 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171802905143 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064205476468 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927896339522 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910966164409 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661570822515 0.056905535591 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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