Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples?
Nowadays, it has become a colossal trend to see that large shopping malls are replacing small shops. There are myriads of reasons for above topic. However, does not matter it let's discuss about the topic. In this essay, I shall further elaborate both the sides which would lead to plausible conclusions.
At the outset, there are deluge of arguments which favors to point that in today's market large shopping malls are replacing in small shops. Moreover, by achiving furthre let's take one example for that. In our era their are different types of people are there: Poor people's and reach people's also their are medium class of people on earth. So small shopping malls are useful for them because rich people are going large malls for shopping, they have enough money for that.
On the flip side, critics argue that by not following standard policy if shopping malls are converting in small shops then it is easy to buy all thing and cloths in low rates so all human can survive on earth. Furthermore, to reach at the signified level we all have to make this topic as a big discussion in between peoples so it is become easy for poor people.
To recapitulate, from the above mentioned arguments one can conclude that shopping malls are convert in small shops it is very great idea and helpful for all humans for survive. In my point of view, government must replacing large shopping malls in to small shops.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73279352227 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29359998582 2.71678728327 84% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554655870445 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1992392748 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4166666667 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300664573264 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12374214506 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105564458512 0.071462118173 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197023767314 0.151781067708 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540610022647 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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