Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples?
The budding population is the source of ascending demand to have more shops, but developing infrastructure eating up the earth is major concern of countries. malls are the best solution to handle both need.
it is obvious that the 21st century humans are more smart and love to shop in a smarter way, malls bring whole market under one roof, well ventilated and air-cooled. it is indispensable to have mall, in scorching heat or heavy rains, whatever is the weather condition your shopping is not going to halt. Builders take big responsibilities to adhere to the need of comfort at the mall, it has ample parking space to avoid parking hassle.
They have various brands under one roof to save time of hopping market to market, even we have food courts with all available restaurants within town. Many malls have PVR. With help of malls consumers are benefited by saving petrol, time, no littering waste, no road encroachent, avoid traffic.
shopping malls not only has these benefits but the social upliftment of the country also depends on a larger percentage of good quality malls. As per a journal in Harvard University shopping malls are changing the lifestyle of our society making the country socially rich. Tourism is also lured by good malls and its construction. countries are investing in malls to explore new prospect of generating fund which not only aid to the GDP but even gives social happiness under one roof.
Albeit small Shopkeepers are facing challenges due to this change but change for a good is to be adopted by all person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92424242424 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63997488649 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3497396642 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 7.25397266985 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166646213641 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585026892192 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023692191741 0.071462118173 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807996697055 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196459168688 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.