Describe the table and pie chart below which shows the spending habits of teenagers in Australia. Table shows the amount of dollars spent on various activities per week while the pie chart show
The first Tabular chart reveals the information about the pay out habits of teenagers in Australia, and second circular chart represents the data about spending amount on education. The data is celebrated in dollars and per-centum.It is clear and coherent representation.
It can be seen that , In Australia teenagers used 100 dollars for the clothes in the year 2001whereas 20 dollars were being spent by the youth of the Australia in the year 2001, and 35 and 150 dollars had been disburse on the entertainment and food respectively. In the next year 2001the teenagers spent 102 dollars for cloth, 30 dollars for cosmetic, and 40 dollars and 60 dollars for entertainment and food respectively. Further In the year 2003 teenagers were pay out 32, 45, and 60 dollars for the clothes, cosmetic, entertainment,and food respectively.
As per as trend was concerned that, spending amount of teenagers on the education. There were 18% amount was expend on the projects whereas the spending amount on the internet was 24% . Furthermore only 3% amount was used for the membership.Moreover the 55% amount was pay out for the books.
Overall It is evident that the maximum amount was expend by the teenagers for the food in the year 2002 and2003 and the minimum amount was spend for cosmetic in the year 2001.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...is celebrated in dollars and per-centum.It is clear and coherent representation. ...
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...t representation. It can be seen that , In Australia teenagers used 100 dollars...
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Suggestion: disbursed
...r 2001, and 35 and 150 dollars had been disburse on the entertainment and food respectiv...
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Suggestion: Further,
...or entertainment and food respectively. Further In the year 2003 teenagers were pay out...
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...for the clothes, cosmetic, entertainment,and food respectively. As per as trend w...
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Suggestion: .
... spending amount on the internet was 24% . Furthermore only 3% amount was used for...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ending amount on the internet was 24% . Furthermore only 3% amount was used for the members...
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...y 3% amount was used for the membership.Moreover the 55% amount was pay out for the book...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...y 3% amount was used for the membership.Moreover the 55% amount was pay out for the book...
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Suggestion: expended
... is evident that the maximum amount was expend by the teenagers for the food in the ye...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...2002 and2003 and the minimum amount was spend for cosmetic in the year 2001.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, second, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00917431193 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06134254565 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463302752294 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4952144235 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173642050067 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879373968999 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437769117338 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114288988407 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431813654924 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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