The tables below give the information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000 with an estimate of the situation in 2050.
The tabular charts illustrate the distribution of world population in different countries from 1950 to with the estimated of 2050.The data calibrated in billions.
Have a look on the first country of Asia, in 1950, there was a 56% of population which upsurged with 4% with in the time period of 50 years and it will reaches around three fifths in to the upcoming years. The second lowest country was Latin America. It kept on 6% in the initial years whereas, till 2050 this will stable on 9%.Different of 10% would be noticed in 2050 however, before the rising the population was recorded about 22%.
By having a glance on other countries, Africa, North America, the population of former one will accumulating a two fifths in the future with the comparison of other decades it will just arise a one in twenty about 13%.In various years such as, 1950,2000 and 2050 the population was 7%,5%,and 4%respectively. Interestingly, Oceania was similar on1% over the time period.
Overall, the global population would be increases till the further years.
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
- Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Other disagree and think that a good salary leads to better life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- Describe the table and pie chart below which shows the spending habits of teenagers in Australia. The table shows the amount of dollar spent on various activities per week while the pie chart show. 78
- Unemployment is getting increasingly serious in many countries Some people think student only need to get primary education while others think secondary education is necessary What s your opinion 74
- The diagrams show the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96022727273 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77574700503 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596590909091 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.009275949 43.030603864 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.714285714 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245534682878 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102784598695 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092951941773 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153536267757 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847992098174 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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