The Chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people who hold a science qualifications in Malaysia and Singapore.
Have a look on the Malaysia country, there is a significant difference between the percentage of masses holding science qualifications at Bachelor's degree is done by the 20% people of Singapore whereas, it is one in ten percent lesser than as compare to the former in Malaysian people. The percentage of individuals school leaving exams in Malaysia and Singapore its lie between 35%, 30% respectively.
By having a glance on the science qualifications in Master level, in both countries Malaysia as well as Singapore less than one in twenty people doing this degree. Afterwards, difference of 5% could be noticed in no qualifications in science towards both countries about 65%.
Overall, higher proportion of the people no qualifications in science in Malaysia and Singapore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3475177305 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29094827157 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.133196861 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.666666667 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216267318406 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126730735634 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705719588587 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161330020983 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561550724382 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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