You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working.
In your letter
1. Describe the work you have been doing
2. Explain why you can no longer do this work
3. Recommend another person who is interested in the work
Write at least 150 words
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to notify you that I will be unable to continue the community service activities which I am volunteered in the organization.
Several activities are provided by the organization to help the community in different fields, but I chose to take care of lonely senior and old people. When I joined this specific voluntary work, I did not realize that I will be part of those people`s happiness. I got also enjoyed with them while providing the required care.
Recently, I joined a post graduate program outside the city, and I shall travel to catch the classes which will start next month. The program is for a complete one year, and I will be out of the city for the whole time until getting my graduation certificate. Therefore, it will be very difficult to continue with the team in the voluntary work.
My voluntary work is still ongoing, and the current team are committed with their work. I would therefore recommend that my brother can replace my position as he has much interest in the voluntary service same like me. He will be available from next week, if you want to interview him first.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Ayoub
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, still, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80861244019 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70437800641 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8366532547 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15105256622 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598412006256 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485112668138 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868342895362 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311449738393 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.