The table below gives information on sales of five car brands in part of world market from 2012 to 2016. Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where relevant. You should write about 150 words.
Brands
Year
Toyota Mercedes Kia Ford Rolls- Royce
2012 14.800 15.800 18.500 19.600 15.100
2013 14.000 11.700 23.700 17.600 10.500
2014 14.500 15.300 27.300 15.600 7.600
2015 14.500 17.400 29.600 22.400 6.700
2016 14.500 18.500 32.500 26.100 5.400
The table compares the consumption of cars of five brands in part of world market between 2012 and 2016. In 2012, Ford led with the sale of 19.600 cars while the lowest number of cars bought was of Toyota, at 14.800 cars. Surprisingly, although started at about 18.000 cars at the beginning at the period, the sale of Kia rocketed considerably to 32.500 at 2016, which is the highest consumption of cars over the 4- year period. In contrast, beginning at about 3.000 cars lower, the number of cars sold by Rolls- Royce shown a significant decline to just 5.400 cars at the end of the period. Over the period, Ford and Mercedes experienced a fluctuation in the sales of cars which reached 26.100 cars and 18.500 cars respectively in 2016. It is the fact that the consumption of Toyota cars remained relatively stable and shown the same figure of 14.500 cars in three successive years from 2014.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of cars bought was of Toyota, at 14.800 cars. Surprisingly, although started at ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6625 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52784493195 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4648073314 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186299096795 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107546941448 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104963829887 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186974680063 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.93 61.2550243902 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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