Nowadays, many children eat food that is not good for health. Why is this happening? what should be done for this?
Increasing number of youngsters, presently, take an unhealthy diet, which is causing health problems among them. While schools and parents are responsible for this issue, there are various viable solutions to redress it.
With regards to the reasons, the non-availability of fresh food in schools is the pertinent contributing factor for this trend due to which students are exhorted to devour fatty, sugary, spicy and salty eatables, such as burgers and pizzas. For instance, according to an editorial published in The Times of India, an esteemed Indian tabloid, the percentage of overweight toddlers is more in the private schools where cafeterias are established compared to the public ones which serve fresh meals for lunch under mid-day meal program in Punjab. Furthermore, since parents often remain occupied with the professional responsibilities, it becomes arduous for them to prepare food; therefore, they provide children with canned eatables having preservatives and sausages.
Creating awareness among individuals is the most effective panacea for redressing this menace. In other words, campaigns and health talks must be arranged by authorities for children as well as parents to impart knowledge regarding the adverse effects of fast food and tremendous benefits of healthy eatables . As a result, schools and parents would supplant junk food with freshly cooked meals. Moreover, carrying tifins having fruits and healthy items ought to be mandatory in schools which would refrain disciples from eating unhealthy food. For instance, in Delhi Public School, Amritsar, parents are provided with a special menu for students brunch and lunch, resulting in less sick leaves compared to other schools.
To conclude, although there are varied reasons due to which children eat inappropriate food, this problem can be tackled effectively by encouraging schools and parents to provide healthy meals to juveniles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... tremendous benefits of healthy eatables . As a result, schools and parents would ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62542955326 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82586130562 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621993127148 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9166250699 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.818181818 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0909090909 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259760787278 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105501667748 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457418357559 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167359445818 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350623713266 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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