You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there.
Write a letter to the tourist information office.
In your letter:
explain what you need
say when you plan to be there
ask for information about prices
Write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to inquire about the availability of an holiday apartment in Singapore for a week's time. While I was planning to visit Singapore with my family for a vacation I was advised by my friend to book an apartment instead of a hotel as it would be far more convenient and economical. I would like a two bedroom apartment with preferably two bathrooms. The apartment should be in the heart of the city with easy access to bus and train stations.
We will in Singapore from the 13th till the 19th July and would need the apartment for a total of seven days and six nights. We shall be landing in Singapore on 13th by 1100 hours and will directly move into the apartment.
Request you to share all details of available apartments along with their per day cost including tax and other overheads, if any. In the quotation, do factor the cost of conveyance as we would need someone to arrange for a pick and drop from and to the Airport on the 13th and 19th July.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Your Faithfully,
Aparna Rachapudi
Comments
I think the essay is good…
I think the essay is good. It would be better to improve in term of vocab. phrazle
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ou to inquire about the availability of an holiday apartment in Singapore for a we...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Your Faithfully, Aparna Rachapudi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58461538462 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58206019401 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5408422786 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198377835881 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768932110156 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654502636151 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11815728576 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493793256883 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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