The flow chart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clip in a small factory.
The flow diagram depicts the unfit about the production of coloured plastic paper clip by a small factory. It is clearly and coherently represented.
First of all, this flow chart has 11 part ,and it begin with molten plastic and finsih with packing and dispatch.
Having a quick glance upon the chart, molten plastic, that stage accur when plastic melting on the high temperature. However ; there are 3 mould that are made of molten plastic such as red mould, blue mould or yellow mould. Moving further: all mould are move to quality control stage after, this stage employee check the strength with the help of machine. When the strength is not complete , the product will be reject.
Secondly, in the three stage in the process the clip are sorted by hand into two group , mixed and single colour. When this stage is complete the group , are checked a second time ,the colour mixture are divided correctly. Finally, the paper clip are packed and then dispatched to the markets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 42, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...irst of all, this flow chart has 11 part ,and it begin with molten plastic and fin...
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Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'begins'?
Suggestion: begins
...ll, this flow chart has 11 part ,and it begin with molten plastic and finsih with pac...
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...lastic melting on the high temperature. However ; there are 3 mould that are made of mo...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...chine. When the strength is not complete , the product will be reject. Secondly, ...
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Line 4, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e clip are sorted by hand into two group , mixed and single colour. When this stag...
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Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r. When this stage is complete the group , are checked a second time ,the colour m...
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Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...te the group , are checked a second time ,the colour mixture are divided correctly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, second, secondly, so, then, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82738095238 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26373429739 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654761904762 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0778507271 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31586545968 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122540724021 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160549855419 0.0843802449381 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215274974124 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162662600148 0.0819641961636 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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