The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the U.S.A. in the 1980 and the 1990.
The supplied pie charts illustrate five sources of energy: coal, natural gas, oil, nuclear power, hydroelectric power are consumed by the U.S.A. in the two years. The data calibrated in percentum.
Overall, It is clearly visible from the pie charts that the oil ratio was highest in both years whist the proportion of hydroelectric power was lead lowest in two years.
Primarily, it is vividly apperant that the oil source of energy had been highest ratio in the 1980, it accorded at more than two fifths as compared to the 1990, it was decreased and recorded at less than third. As far as, the hydroelectric power and nuclear power was lowest in 1980, it noticed at one in twenty whereas, in 1990 the nuclear power was increased but the hydroelectric power was decreased, it observed at 5% and 10% respectively.
Similarly, it can be incurred that the U.S.A. used the coal 22% in 1980 as opposed in 1990 the consumption of coal was inclined in 2%. The natural gas lead the second highest ratio in 1980, it registered at 26% in comparison with the 1990, it was drop up 1%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'been the highest'.
Suggestion: been the highest
...erant that the oil source of energy had been highest ratio in the 1980, it accorded at more ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, similarly, so, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69473684211 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66972354799 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531578947368 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3310594528 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.428571429 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171078523173 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083311326746 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598723176937 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101814452111 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450851394656 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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