Write an essay to show your opinion about studying abroad.
In this day and age, studying in other countries tends to be increasingly familiar to the whole society. A recently conducted research reveals that the majority of foreign learners are university students. Concerning this, I personally believe that studying abroad is beneficial to undergraduates in three different ways.
First, it seems evident to me that learning overseas means approaching new knowledge. By enrolling in a study-abroad program, undergraduates will have the chance to see a side of their major that they may not have been exposed to at home. Moreover, language abilities and insights into the outside world are supposed to be enhanced when leading an overseas student’s life. For example, in Singapore, Vietnamese students learn to focus more on solving problems, rather than just raising them as they used to do in their own homeland. Therefore, studying abroad can help prepare undergraduates for a prosperous intellectual economy.
Second, learning overseas gives learners many chances to have more in-depth understanding about various cultures. Not only from the host country can they understand the cultural traits but also from other ones. That is to say, because international students come from different corners of the world, they are culturally different from each other. Thus, a winter break in the United States universities, for instance, serves as a really good opportunity for foreign students to try cross-cultural specialities and traditional dances.
Finally, I am convinced that these undergraduates also get more living experiences when studying abroad. As they have to live independently and do everything on their own, they will gradually learn to manage campus problems, such as time and money, effectively. In addition, dealing with many people assists them in gaining numerous pocket tips in a brand-new environment. To make it clearer, that students make acquaintance with a wide range of friends is bound to work wonders when they need advices in their study, daily situations or love life.
All things considered, studying abroad, with its dominant roles in broadening enquiring minds, fostering cultural exploration and enriching life skills, is a big opportunity for undergraduates to challenge and perfect themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recently conducted research'.
Suggestion: Recently conducted research
...easingly familiar to the whole society. A recently conducted research reveals that the majority of foreign le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58333333333 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12517406042 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635057471264 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.782843363 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.294117647 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107764854275 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366682353847 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432131448495 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636786951733 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303766230067 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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