You would like to invite before and friend to visit you for your birthday write a letter inviting your friends
Tell your friend about your birthday
Explain how much the visit would mean to you
Suggest that your friend stays at your house for the visit
Hi John,
How are you doing? Its been a long time that I got a chance to speak with you as I have been bombarded with assignments.Anyways, I am writng this letter to invite you to my birthday part on the 6th of August. Let me tell you further.
As you know, my parents love to throw grand birthday parties for me and this year it's no different.I would be glad if you decide to come over for my birthday Also, all our friends from high school are going to come over and it would be great reunion for everyone.We could talk about your new college in Nagpur and I could fill you up with what's happening here in Pune. We all could have a great time together.
It would amazing if you could come over for my birthday and you don't have to make living arrangements as I would love to host you. I am eagerly waiting for your response.
Regards,
Chetan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi John, How are you doing? Its been a long time ...
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Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Anyways
... I have been bombarded with assignments.Anyways, I am writng this letter to invite you ...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...s for me and this year its no different.I would be glad if you decide to come ove...
^
Line 4, column 264, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
... it would be great reunion for everyone.We could talk about your new college in Na...
^^
Line 4, column 340, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... in Nagpur and I could fill you up with whats happening here in Pune. We all could ha...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 10, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'amaze'
Suggestion: amaze
...have a great time together. It would amazing if you could come over for my birthday ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 65, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...could come over for my birthday and you dont have to make living arrangements as I w...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25153374233 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47089269302 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.937958808 44.8134815571 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 99.0 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272896500772 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104920884242 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856647450139 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197304213039 0.12726935374 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627225037606 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.67 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.