people's behaviour is largely determined by forces not of their own making
The way a person conducts himself/herself is largely influenced by the company and the upbringing. I strongly feel that behaviour is a consequence of many forces
that are integrated. What we see in a person is just the result of these forces. Person should never be judged on the basis of what we see superficially rather we
must understand the gravity of the current situation along with other factors.
In a society where there is a lot of hussle we cannot expect a calm behaviour. If stress and ill behaviour is seen it is the result of surroundings that impact how the person
behaves.For instance, road rage is seen quite often these days. The harsh behaviour seen at that time is due to the traffic, noise pollution, stress and many other factors that
are seen in the form of rage.These factors should never be taken into account when we have to deal with the person.
Secondly, i also believe that upbringing plays a very important role to decide whether the external factors will affect us or not. we are brought up by looking our parents. We
as kids observed them very carefully. All those instances are there in our subconscience. when the same situation arise we by default utilise our previous knowledge
and act accordingly.
Thirdly, sometimes when we are not wise enough to take decisions, we are carried away and influenced by what others will tell us. In many situations i have seen myself
that due to the fear of result people behave and act in an indifferent manner. In the work place they acquire obstentatious behaviour in order to avail best out of the situation.
The quality is not a part of their nature but people acquire them to fit into the situation.
From all the examples quoted above i will stick firmly to the fact that people's behaviour can be modified according to the surroundings and they can act weirdly and
show traits which are not their own.
- people's behaviour is largely determined by forces not of their own making 50
- "A recent study of eighteen rhesus monkeys provides clues as to the effects of birth order on an individual's levels of stimulation. The study showed that in stimulating situations (such as an encounter with an unfamiliar monkey), firstborn infant monkeys 18
- Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study 50
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...he fear of result people behave and act in an indifferent manner. In the work place they acquire obstent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74622356495 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70025404912 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546827794562 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.3832034148 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4117647059 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.97078651685 282% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13258092675 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041522033681 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508988803446 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518034716639 0.150359130593 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609083980545 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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